This one had a strong start, with the quest for revenge qued up nicely, but it reads like a rough draft. The magical rules that govern everything are nebulous at best and given out in tiny amounts throughout rather than in the introductory chapters. Halfway through the book and he's relearning them AGAIN much to my frustration. Combine this with redundant sentences and misused commas, not to mention a single instance where the mc pauses to take off shoes that he didn't have a few pages prior, and you are left with a muddled mess of a novel that is painfully in need of revision
2/5 Decent dungeon core story ruined by sloppy execution.