AUDITEUR

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Writing is like a pre-teen Wattpad fanfiction

Au global
1 out of 5 stars
Performance
2 out of 5 stars
Histoire
1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-12-19

The overall plot could be maybe interesting if it weren't for the over explaining of everything, jumping from topic to topic, forgetting previous information, and so on. The characters feel so flat and dry as if they're out of a pre-teen's wet dream. Also, for what ever reason with the editing, the narrator's voice changes from the end of some chapters to the beginning of the next so it sounds for a bit like a new person talking.