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4 star story 1 star humour.

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2 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-11-07

The narrator does a great job and there are many likeable characters. The story is fresh and well paced. But those jokes are pathetic and the mc is not funny at all. Why does he tell himself so many bad jokes is it to torture the reader? Also the relationship feels like too much too soon. Some relationships can progress quickly like that it just seems to easy and not really entertaining without an obstacle or two.

good story but..

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3 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-11-07

great series and narration. tempo works against it tho as the story fails to connect all the varied stories and elements. also the story ends on a massive debriefing and information session no fun to be had in a military and progress report. the split between exploration crafting and management is poorly balanced. should be 2/3 character development and story with 1/3 on skills crafting and dungeon management. bogs down the fun aspects of the story with information diatribes that ruin the pacing.

cliche tired repetitive

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1 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-10-26

To start loved the first book it was original, dark with decent characters and progression. this one is not that. its cliche with the whole cursed sword sacrifice speel which is overplayed and I expected way more from the author after the originality of the first. The story is depressing in its execution of events always dark without comic relief in the form of banter between the expiditionary party like the previous title. Very repetative seen in the hundredth time u have to listen to orics nightmare or hear his backstory which was beaten to death in book one. Not to mention the idiotic little girl who spends the whole book lashing out at her father. Lastly the end was terrible and predictable major contrast from intro novel. narration was decent but the word piety and impious are pronounced wrong starts as pie not pee . odd error for a pro like that.

boring and repeptitive

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-10-18

the start is slow, boring and many of the story elements are Reskins of the last series. the 2 mains being inverted but still a stealth and a warrior. way too much political maneuvering and half talk. the female lead reminds me alot of noriko and not in a good way. she adopts her selfishness which was hard to listen to b4 not interested in a repeat.

that ending jesus

Au global
4 out of 5 stars
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5 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-10-17

I was enjoying the story greatly till the author destroyed his own characters. most of the conflict in this book makes no sense to me. Spoilers@@@ Why would ryu have lost his abilities for killing a night blade like renzo but not when shigure or orochi died he was much more invested and conflicted then. why make noriko such a selfish arrogant dbag for half the book. And the way the main fight ended is disgraceful. if it was a group battle I'd understand but talk about a terrible way to end ryus last duel. all that training and work to be bailed out like he wasn't strong enough just the decoy. Why cant the mc ever succeed on there own merits. it's always a prophecy or some last minute sacrifice or saving/interference. Not much to be proud of.

Reminded me of the star wars ending where u follow Luke's growth for 3 movies just so his daddy can bail him out, seems the good guys are always inferior and needing saving. Which makes sense throughout the book but at the end you'd think they could bridge the gap. I think had she protected him from many hunters and watched his back while he took out the leader it would have been much more enjoyable. They could have swapped out like a tag team alternating between dueling and protecting the duelist or have made the old man more of a fighter to give each of them a worthy rival at the end. Either way i felt sorry for him. If u break it done hes failed at everything.

what happened to the series

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1 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-09-28

Great narration. That being said the previous books had flaws but were funny as hell but this book is just flawed. The characters ooze insecurity, jealousy, pettyness and immaturity. It feels like they developed backwards. All the annoying bickering between the girls and the way toffle acts is pitifull, hardly entertaining in any way. also strange that Ver seems to get less intelligent as time passes. he was never bright but I feel hes written to be an idiot just to try and make a scene humorous rather then it being the way the character would develop naturally. Lastly the relationship with alice and the skeleton is an epic fail skelly was the best points of humour in the last 2 books now hes just boring.

repetative themes

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4 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-09-26

this book feels tired and repetative. same jokes and situations as the first book. the overpowered nature of the main character isn't anything shocking by this point and the constant need to show it is tedious. getting to the point I know what will happen like when the Fishmen mention the leviathan u knew veer would come out carrying it predictable. I still love the skeletons but they've had fewer parts so they cant boost the rating much.

funny but flawed

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1 out of 5 stars
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4 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-09-25

the book is hilarious for the half and a bit but then the flaws show. the massacre scenes and the aftermath with toffle was pretty pointless and some major events happen off book including fights that should have been covered. Also seems the author doesn't know when to stop trying to be funny to let serious moments take place in the story. sours the overall experience when a the story fails to balance a scene and it falls flat. chapter 47(45) is a perfect example.

pls stop trying to tell jokes

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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars
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3 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-09-24

author is either the worst joker or the most talented writer at depicting terrible characters with a horrible sense of humour. I was liking the world but couldn't stick thru the awful jokes. especially when Steve shows up talk about annoying.

dumbest dad humour

Au global
1 out of 5 stars
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2 out of 5 stars
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1 out of 5 stars

Évalué le: 2019-09-19

I cant tell if the author meant for the mc humour to be terrible to the point I can barely keep listening or it's simply hes got zero talent at it but it would be best to avoid making large amounts of bad jokes instead of trying and failing so much. I also feel like an adult who drinks alone is likely to swear instead of using McDonalds references in the place of cursing very odd choices unless the author happens to be a child.

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