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returning it, author shot himself in the foot.

Évalué le: 2020-01-26

got to chapter 3, the whole excuse to not swear just ruined the whole book for me if you dont want to write swear words as an author just dont instead of sticking a 3 page long reason why our mc says dumb stuff like "oompaloompa" instead of "fuck" it gives the book a corny feeling and I just cant do it.
this is a missed opportunity, this world and characters had a chance of being great the author shot himself in the foot. I am left disappointed by this.

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Évalué le: 2019-12-27

This book...hahah I've been fooled a few times I'm actually starting to believe that there are fake reviews on audible. I bought this only after seeing all 5star reviews little did I know...
THIS BOOK IS GARBAGE! I am honestly frustrated by the mc no one could be that naive and the story? Really? The character relationships are...just bad. The plot is weak and the author explains nothing! I'm 7hrs in and I couldn't even tell you what the books about yet. Disgusting. I'm returning it.

same old garbage

Évalué le: 2019-12-19

mc spends the entire book in self pity, has 0 growth and gets his ass saved again this series has gotten boring. I'm done with it.

a glimpse of his potential

Évalué le: 2019-11-27

the mc finally starts settling into his role, mysterious powers move behind the scenes.
all in all a solid book.

extremely juvenile. just returned it.

Évalué le: 2019-11-25

book is largely aimed at an audience of children perhaps around the age of 12. the writing is...childish at best. I made it 41 minutes in before I called it quits and returned the book., litrpg is largely hit and miss so I am not overly surprised at this point.

WOW!....JUST WOW!

Évalué le: 2019-11-22

if you're looking for monster fighting, epic lootz, stunning magical arts.....

this book is not for you. while the game world holds the promise of such experiences this book is masterfully written in a way that just pulls you in without any of the litrpg fan fare.
I was pleasantly surprised because I'm a sucker for levels and epic lootz but this book really did it for me. and there were some good lolz too!

if I hear "his eyes flashed" one more time.....

Évalué le: 2019-11-16

im about half way through and I'm pausing to write this review because I am extremely tired of hearing that line "his eyes flashed" it is used atleast once every chapter its like this author could not for the life of him come up with a different way of conveying a sense of the characters inner conflict without using it, and the narrator pronounces "ki" as "kai" instead of "key" it's super cringey.

HOWEVER, the story is very good I feel like there are many missed opportunities in the world the author has created that could have substantially improved on the book as a whole and even more questions that lead me to wonder how this book has all 5 star ratings so far but It holds up well. I have over 9months of listening time logged into audible and this book definitely would not meet my requirements to be recommended to my circle of friends but I am enjoying the story to a certain degree.
I would not reccomend this book if you have a penchant for noticing small errors that take away from the story, even less so if that penchant tends to ruin books for you.....a lot of things in this story simply do not add up.

interested in hearing stats every 5minutes?

Évalué le: 2019-10-25

I really like stats but this author really over did it. I'm willing to bet atleast 40% of this book is stats. it's rather irritating because the capters are short some as short as 1min 30 seconds and after almost every chapter there are stats or useless info dumps. it really take away from the story and gives you a sense that the author was just trying to bring up his word count. I would not reccomend this book if u dont want to be skipping chapters every few minutes

mc is still a joke. I'm done.

Évalué le: 2019-10-19

7 books and 100$ later and all I hear is yerin this yerin that. honestly why do we even have Linden in these books if he fails at every corner gains power but still gets kicked around like a chump? I'm so tired of this garbage I'm just going to cut my losses and return this useless cash grab that doesnt advance the story one bit.
the author writes all this b.s making u think linden is the mc of this story when his writing makes you believe that linden is just a prop for yerin to kick around and save. towards the end of the book linden has to fight yerin in the uncrowned event and as usual he just sits there like a whiney bitch while she kicks him around. this trend is showing no signs of changing I followed along for 7 books with each book hoping that the writer would finally change his style but I'm quickly realizing this is a money grab I'm sure the next 7 books will be more of the same b.s. mc gains some power manages to best a few chars pointless to the plot and then still gets kicked around. I'm done. enjoy my 100$ investment in your b.s will.

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...getting old fast

Évalué le: 2019-10-09

I'm getting tired of the mc losing battle after battle or using cheap gimmicks to win. this is book 4 now and with every book I find myself growing tired of this mc he gains power but he is still a coward who loses at every turn.