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Awakening

A LitRPG Story (Outworld, Book 1)

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Awakening

Auteur(s): Mrdojo
Narrateur(s): Joshua Story
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What do you desire in exchange for your soul? Everlasting youth? A million dollars? Women? Power?

Bored high-schooler Adam Staples wants for nothing. Such an offer could only be a prank, right? Who would have thought that the prankster is a demon in disguise?

After selling his soul and turning into a half-demon, Adam finds himself orphaned and dragged into a realm outside of the world he knew. Training under his benefactor and enrolling in a school made for those who were gifted with powers, Adam ventures around the Outworld to hunt down the demon that turned his life inside out...and perhaps to squash a bit of the guilt he carries for what he had done to his family.

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The beginning of the book was relatively rough. It felt extremely rushed and not well thought out. But, as I got past the first couple of chapters, the book began getting better; it has a great story (though the MC seldom fights someone above his ability to beat easily- which makes it seem like there are lower stakes [he also starts the book overpowered]).

Overall, it's a great book with a rough start and several flaws. If you're able to suffer through the beginning and appreciate a badass main character, this book is worth a try.

Great Book With a Rough Start

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If I hear this word one more time I may scream. Great story but the writer needs a thesaurus.

Quiver?????

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The basic bones are there, but inconsistent character development and drastic changes in personality and state of mind make it very difficult to care about anything in the book. The characters are either pissed off, back stabby, horny, of just plain anxious with nothing to motivate any of it.

Stuff happens and I just can't see how, why, or what the point is supposed to be. Decide who your characters are and try to make them more than unmotivated reactions, then we'll see what "Outworld" is all about.

All concept with very little story

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I am currently two hours into the book and if I hear "before .... .. could finish his statement" one more time im going to return it for my credit. this is ridiculous how do you not notice that you use the exact same fucking line 16 times in one chapter??!! the world building so far is non existent the author spectacularly fails at painting a picture often leaving you wondering if u missed an entire chapter and when he does the mediocrity and to be frank half-assed attempts had me clenching my jaw. its so frustrating finding books like these where the author actually had a damn good idea but somehow just cannot deliver on selling it. this is no dakota krout or Aleron Kong, nor did I come here expecting it, i have pretty low standards when it comes to litrpg lately as I have spent over 5months on audible stats listening to this genre so I have listened to pretty much all the good ones...so far this book is pushing the limits for the absolute bottom of the barrel. if you are like me and you came here because you saw a litrpg over 20hours and you're about to drop that credit cause you like bang for your buck I urge you to ignore the high ratings which seem to liter the absolute worst of this genre lately. this book will disappoint you unless you are 15yrs old or younger. I will however give credit to the narrator. the voice acting was actually pretty good.

Note to author after returning for credit: I read your bio on Amazon clearly you are an amateur, there is nothing wrong with that, I pray to God that English is not your first language that is the only thing that can explain this mess. Keep writing and keep improving but I do not think you are ready to monetize, you say you are an avid reader...it does not show in your writing. I urge you to seek professional help if you are planning on releasing further books.its better to have a 10hour long strongly written novel than a 20hpur long pile of garbage. I wish you luck moving forward but I will never get another one of your books.

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