
Path of the Forerunner
The System Arrives, Book 1
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Narrateur(s):
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Hannah Trusty
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Brad Derry
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Auteur(s):
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Terry Carter
À propos de cet audio
One Tuesday changes everything for Robert Williams. A cosmic entity known as the System arrives, selecting him—a suburban father and engineer—as Earth's sole representative for integration. He has six months to say goodbye to his family before being exiled to another universe for over 400 years. Guided by an AI companion and gifted with powerful starting perks, Robert must navigate a new reality defined by levels, skills, magic, and dungeon crawls. From learning basic spells to crafting powerful artifacts and facing down monstrous foes, Robert races against time, not just for his own survival, but to prepare his loved ones and maybe even his planet for a future transformed by the System.
©2025 Terry Carter (P)2025 Royal Guard Publishing LLCgreat
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The main character’s speech pattern was all over the place, which made it tough to get a real sense of their personality. It pulled me out of the story more than once.
On top of that, the side characters didn’t get much love. They felt underdeveloped and mostly served as props to move the plot along, without much depth or growth.
Overall, the story had some potential, but the character work and writing style made it tough to stay engaged.
Missed Potential: A Story That Tells Too Much
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