Extremely Well-Narrated

The book was exciting to read and full of vivid descriptions to entice one's imagination. I only wish there was a bit more suspense, worry, and uncertainty to the read; despite the author's efforts the main character came across as invincible in many ways. Maybe it's just me and my reading style but I would have loved to be convinced that all hope is lost and be pleasantly surprised afterwards.

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Great performances but pacing issues

There are some pacing issues in the book and the constant bickering can be a bit much. I still couldn't stop listening. I had a great time. Fantastic narrators.

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Its decent but not Logans best work!

Coming to review from book 4, no spoilers.

Well it’s a pretty good story but ill be stopping with book 4, the overall plot gets to be a bit tedious, it feels as if the author gives too much away too quick and keeps leading you on the same plodding trail, perhaps that’s a result of the MC always being at the school, he does go off on short missions/tests/trials but always ends back at the school which I find to be extremely boring considering the author paints such an interesting universe that you never really get to experience. Also the love scenes do drag on and I’m not a fan of the girls calling him master and Sir constantly, also its off putting about the absolute control like they are just puppets, the thing is that’s not how it was in the first couple books which was better imo, it starts to switch in book three. For example: YOU don't C_M until I tell you can C_M, Okay master, okay Sir. And pretty every scene is exactly like that over and over, its pretty Much 24/7 Dom with a puppet. It becomes worse near the end of book 4, like the girls are just meat puppets who need permission to do anything, I get that having control over someone could be interesting but the author goes way over the top. I can only imagine how cringey book 5 will be

Someone compared this story to Harry Potter, and honestly its pretty accurate. Although the MC become’s quite powerful

Don’t get me wrong the story is good but there isn’t enough there to over come the stuff I don’t like about the story, this will be the first series from Logan I will not finish, no fault to the author tho, its good he tries different things, this series will be for some people but it’s not for me.

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Loving The DARKER Tone

Logan really enjoying this new series! With a Darker MC and Submissive Girls taking the cake. Hope/would expect this series to have a very long life!

Christoper Boucher I am enjoying your narration of this series so far! I know past books that you have narrated your narration could really suck me out of the immersion of the story. The reason behind this for me is I couldn’t always tell based on your voice if you were voicing the MC or just doing general narrative of the story because your voice usually sounds so similar if not the same for both. Just my opinion.

Jessica Threat great as always! Can’t wait for more!

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Awesome Narrator

Generic story but the narrator sells it. Like a more cheesy but 'adult' 2010's YA mystery fantasy with very light progression elements.

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Meh

The male narrator sounds like he's trying to sexually assault you with his voice. Every word is angsty and aggressive. Every. Fucking. Word. I'm 45 mins in don't know if I'm even going to finish it. Female narrator is great! Story is kinda lame. I am forusre not the target audience. Switched review from 2 starts to 1.

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