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Twilight Templar

The Eternal Journey, Book 1
Auteur(s): C. J. Carella
Narrateur(s): Guy Williams
Série: The Eternal Journey, Livre 1
Durée: 14 h et 38 min
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A game of life and death

(Warning: Contains violence as well as adult situations and language)

Ben sat down to play a brand-new MMORPG, Eternal Journey Online. Next thing he knew, he had been transformed into his character, first-level Paladin Hawke Lightseeker, and found himself in a corpse-filled cavern complex crawling with monsters and undead. Armed with a sentient sword, Hawke must learn the rules of a reality where magic and power-leveling are as real as swords and knives, and where you only get a limited number of respawns before you die for good.

Follow Hawke as he explores the mysterious Common Realm, meets new friends and foes, battles to survive, and learns more about his growing power and inner strength.

Note to LitRPG Fans: This novel concentrates primarily on action-adventure, with a focus on power-leveling and learning new magic and class subsystems. Future novels will deal with town and stronghold management. There is also a harem-lite subplot that plays a part in the story without detracting from it.

©2020 Fey Dreams Productions, LLC (P)2020 Fey Dreams Productions LLC

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  • P. G. McFinnigan
  • 2020-09-04

Not that great

The only redeeming quality of this meh book is that the voice actor's rendition of a seductive female sounds like a 60 year old life long smoker. It's hilarious, but also equally disturbing. The sex scenes are also random to the point of being annoying, and so poorly written that they completely throw off the feel of the story. The story isn't great to begin with, but with the added lounge smoker voice, while hilarious, the hell spasms that your brain releases make this book not pleasant to listen to. You already have to speed the book up, since the guy talks so slow you may as well be treading through knee high mud. If you have absolutely nothing else at all to listen to, maybe give it a go. Avoid otherwise.

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 2020-09-09

Generic but fun enough.

Breaking this into 2 sections, I'll start with non-spoiler stuff. The world building is nothing new, dude gets pulled into a game world, gets spells and Mana and hp etc. Done in an amusing way but otherwise fairly basic. The mc is a plumber, fairly successful at his job, somewhat successful with women, nothing special overall. The writing is competent mechanically, fights flow well, dialogue is mostly believable, nothing jumped out as "bad" or really interrupted the story. The narration was competent mechanically, it was easy to understand, there where different voices for different people, certain races had a stereotypical but well done accent etc. The narration wasn't special, but it was perfectly serviceable and frankly that's what I want from narration, competence that doesn't compete with the actual story. Overall an enjoyable if somewhat generic game-lit story, probably worth 4.5 stars if that was possible, closer to 4 so 4 it gets. Minor (very minor) spoilers here. The harem subplot is shoehorned in, and feels fairly unnatural. The usual "different world different rules" ploy is in effect there, but the women are too perfectly accepting of the whole thing (and already trying to add more women by the end). The main character is also more or less too perfect, everybody likes him on sight (except the designated enemies), all the women wanna bang him (and/or join his harem) and he is just the all around awesome dude that everybody wants to be friends with. He makes a few obvious and easily fixed mistakes, and then nothing... Overall a slightly less perfect MC and no harem subplot (or at least, a much slower and more natural one) would have greatly improved the story.

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  • kevin
  • 2020-08-26

its ok

the narrator needs a female co-narrator for this book, when ever he does a female voice its just gross. so the hole harem thing is this book feels off like there was some things that didn't fall in place to happen are left out. ill most likely return this for my credit.

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  • lucas
  • 2020-09-03

Great story .... needs a better narrator

great story , likable characters but the narrator is very monotone and he mispronounced words and names repeatedly

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  • Berserk
  • 2020-09-21

This story started off strong but got weak fast

This story started off strong, but got weak and strange really fast. I feel like this book must have been written over the course of month/ years then finished in a rush. The story started off strong with a likeable main character and a cool class concept, then things start coming off the rails and the main character turns into a mary sue, The guy within a week of being in the world gains the favor of 4 goddesses on both the light and dark sides of a pantheon, a legendary epic scaling sword, and a totally unique class that basically lets him be a ninja/ paladin/ spellcaster murder machine. I really liked the first half of the book then it was none stop eye rolling at the plot armor this main character is given. Also I love the ladies just at much as the next guy, but the second I hear sister wife or any of the harom crap it just makes the story drag. As a sidebar the main character does all kinds of random blue pill actions when it comes to any women in the story. The story had promise but the author let it fall apart.

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  • Anonymous User
  • 2020-08-14

Finally a amazing litrpg

characters are unique and unpredictable. the story keeps you interested and on the edge of your seat!! litrpg elements are soft only thing I would change is to have more crafting or more about arcane blacksmithing

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  • Vincent P Short
  • 2020-10-25

Solid

Not a whole lot to say about this one. The odds are pretty skewed in the MC favor. Story is pretty linear, but not convoluted. I will be picking up book two

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 2020-10-15

Why?

I stopped listening when he fucked his sword. That shit really came out of nowhere.

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  • Ryan
  • 2020-10-15

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After listening to this audiobook. I would give it a score of 3 out of 5. The story has tremendous potential but the writer limit himself by targeting Reeders 18 and under. If you can get through the first 5 hours of the audiobook it does get better, unfortunately the writer has a limited understanding of gamers. One of the biggest motivation of most if not all gamers playing MMORPG games is to gain as much level and loot possible. I’ve listen to the audiobooks that does it much better than this one which is unfortunate because the store does have a lot of potential. You could also tell by the tone of the writer how little respect he has for woman in this new world. He sees the more as sex objects and pretend like it does, which is just faults to the reader!. If you do listen to the second audiobook hopefully the writing improves.

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  • Jahmal turner 69
  • 2020-10-05

I like most of this book but..

most of this book was good I was really starting to like it the out of nowhere its a weird harem totally unnecessary and not earned