In this episode of our Essay Mini Series, hosts Nicole and Amanda dive deep into the “Community” essay and what these prompts are really asking admissions officers want to know. They break down the two core questions behind the essay: How has this community shaped who you are, and how will that relationship carry forward into your time at their university?

Nicole and Amanda discuss how broadly “community” can be defined—from teams, classes, neighborhoods, cultural identities, and online spaces to less obvious groups like being an only child or navigating overlapping identities. They emphasize the importance of choosing a community where you had real involvement and impact, rather than one you simply observed.

The episode also highlights common mistakes students make, such as focusing too much on accomplishments, over-describing the community, repeating content from other essays, or sharing details that don’t actually reveal anything meaningful about the writer. Nicole and Amanda explain how to keep the focus on personal growth, contribution, and reflection.

Finally, they address prompts that ask about future contributions—offering guidance on how to discuss values, specific experiences, and realistic ways students might engage on campus without falling into overused or vague claims.

Whether you’re struggling to define your community or trying to figure out how to show impact and growth, this episode will help you craft a thoughtful, intentional, and authentic “Community” essay.

🎙️ Essay Mini Series: “Personality” Essay

In this episode of our Essay Mini Series, hosts Nicole and Amanda explore one of the most creative and revealing prompts students encounter: the “Personality” essay. They discuss how this prompt allows you to showcase who you are beyond grades and activities—and how to strike the right balance between authenticity, storytelling, and self-reflection.

Nicole and Amanda walk through how to highlight your unique traits, avoid clichés, and choose anecdotes that feel fresh and genuine. They also break down common pitfalls, like trying too hard to be quirky or focusing more on events than personality.

Whether you’re trying to figure out which aspects of yourself to spotlight or want to bring more voice and vibrancy into your writing, this episode will help you craft a memorable “Personality” essay that truly sounds like you.

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🎙️ Essay Mini Series: “Why Major” Essay

In this episode of our Essay Mini Series, hosts Nicole and Amanda unpack the ever-important “Why Major” essay—an opportunity for students to showcase curiosity, clarity, and direction. They explain what admissions officers hope to learn from this prompt, how to move beyond generic statements, and the key elements every strong response should include.

From reflecting on formative experiences to connecting academic interests with future goals, Nicole and Amanda offer practical strategies, common mistakes to avoid, and examples that bring the essay to life.

Whether you’re still exploring possible majors or already know exactly what you want to study, this episode will help you craft a thoughtful, focused, and authentic “Why Major” essay that stands out.

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