Well .... I'm conflicted ...

I love Cohen's work; it's raw, extremely difficult and this novel borders on poetry.
The first narrator nails it (Rudnicki, I think?); imho he should have read the whole book. He crafts the timing, the angst, the phrasing, the humor, and the poetry, the French. He even sounds like Cohen.
Then another voice comes in (Pinchot? who I normally love, or Lescault?) playing the "other" lover; and the poor narrator is out of his depths. He does hit some rhythms that work, but generally it feels like he's floundering about. Then, there's a third voice. I kinda felt like there was no one overseeing the whole production. Cohen is tough writing, but OMG, when it's done well, it's magic. There was a lot of overly worked, mangled French in the non-first narrator bits and odd over-acting.
I dunno. I guess I'm disappointed, hence my negative take.
Maybe listen to the first narrator's part, and then return it to Audible. The second half is painful.

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Disappointed

I was very disappointed because I like his music but I found the writing to be perverse.
I like Erotica but it was not only gross but it was never ending

Provoking and scandalous fantasy experiences

High language mixed to the vulgar in harsh sexual practices and symbolic acts. It was hard to read the story and it is hard to understand its purpose, if it has any.