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Final Core: Volume 1

Auteur(s): D.M. Rhodes, Razzmatazz
Narrateur(s): Adam Verner
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I died and was accidentally reborn as an [angelic monstrosity].

So now I'm building a holy dungeon-tower that is tall enough to reach the gods...so that I can complain about it!

But the humans think that I am trying to destroy the world.

This is the first volume of the Final Core, a dungeon core base-building LitRPG series.

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I think there are two major problems here: false advertising, and poor casting, direction and scripting for the audiobook libretto (or whatever it's called. At best, this book is mildly amusing when I was promised uproarious laughter. I also was recommended this based on my love of Beware of Chicken, so this was completely a mismatch. Still a very strong story that I enjoyed once I got over the fact that it wasn't going to be a barrel of laughs, which colored my entire experience of it.

Second, the voice actor is very good, but I do wonder why he was chosen when all the characters in the first half of the book are either androgynous non-binary or female. The director seems to have resolved this by making him speak breathily and "ethereally" for most of the book, which got irritating. The script was also intensely repetitive, I can probably recite from memory the monster points for each level of the dungeon/tower, and the initial skills the dungeon core had access to as well. Very frustrating, I felt.

I would still recommend the book, but I would advise that the advertising change, and if edits were possible at this stage, that some of the repetitiveness be resolved as well.

Some fatal flaws, but overall good

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it was a decent overall listen but the monster cost panels got irritating over time as it didn't change and having it happen multiple times in a single chapter was less then ideal. it felt like it took up at least 10 - 15 minutes of it which typing doesn't sound like a lot with the overall run time but it was more repetitive then it needed to be when the actual numbers for what was in the rooms was never really touched on. but that was the only real complaint I had with it

decent but could have used some edits

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Great book overall. The educational bits at the ends of the chapters were actually interesting, relevant to the story, and kept short enough to not be an issue even if you don’t care about the info.

Main character has some personal growth. Which seems rare for any book tagged litrpg. Though I wonder how much of the developing personality is due to the infusion process that made them. And how much is the “act” becoming a real mindset.

It did feel like the book should have finished 3 hours before it actually does. The climax and resolution happens well before the end of the book. And then we just keep going. There’s a couple loose ends tied up a little neater. But they were already implied to have a resolution. It does likely set up some things for the next book. But it ends with those feeling minor and not necessarily requiring another book. I was still glad to get these extra hours though. I was enjoying the story and was perfectly happy for it to keep going.


Overall this is a lighthearted book. Very clean and moderately amusing to watch someone who still thinks it’s a bird learn to be a dungeon.

Good for a chuckle -follow a bird brain as a dungeon core.

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