Not horrible

Story: 8/10, It was interesting enough, the characters a bit cliche but that is common in the genre. LitRPG Elements: 7/10, many of the elements seemed copied from other books, While few systems are truly unique this felt copied rather then a parallel evolution, (likely from the God Core series) Dialog: 5/10, It was the weakest part of the book in my opinion. The characters need to keep some constancy. They kept bouncing between fantasy phrasings and modern phrasings, which made the to primary characters seem like LARPers who can't keep their role straight. And while I appreciate diversity in how something is worded, it often reads like the MC ate a thesaurus, and is spitting out random words. Dungeon Core: 6/10, As a Dungeon core, it was pretty middling, the author has the MC skipping over details far to much. Or has the reason for doing something be, the Fairy told me to do it, The Fairy says there is a Rule, or I Had a dream. while those elements are common they're reasoning is rarely explained. I did appreciate that the stats were kept to their own part of the chapter and not repeatedly used in a chapter. Audible Narration: 8/10, Miles does a great job, but kept dropping out of the Dwarven (American Scottish) accent at weird places.

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