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Hell to Pay

Succubus, Book 2
Written by: A.J. Markam
Narrated by: Iggy Toma
Length: 8 hrs and 45 mins
4.5 out of 5 stars (11 ratings)
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Publisher's Summary

Ian survived his first week as a quality control tech for the biggest virtual reality game online. What's more, he's in love with the hottest woman imaginable.

Only trouble is, she's a demoness from hell. In a videogame. And now he has to go and rescue her.

There will be pirates in airships, lustful female elves, and an insanely powerful warlock intent on destroying Ian, Alaria, and Stig.

Join our intrepid trio as they journey to the frozen north - but no matter how cold it gets, the action is going to be hot, hot, HOT.

Warning: This is a story featuring naked women, threesomes, kinky sex, demons, warlocks, violence, revenge, and moral quandaries.

©2018 A.J. Markam (P)2018 Podium Publishing

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Moderation is key

Enjoyed the first book with the occasional erotic content but this book was sluggish for the later half with some sex scenes lasting for 20+ minutes of narration, of which there was more than a few. I found myself bored and skipping over decent chunks of time just to get to the next brief section of plot before another dragged on porn description.

+ enjoyed the fantasy mmo setting
- flimsy plot filler for a narrative porn

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Loved it..

Loved it! just as good as book one, it's like world of Warcraft meets 50 shades of grey

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  • Gregory B Kellis
  • 2018-12-12

Predictable

2nd book in the series became predictable, and at times corny. Not a lot of character development. First half of the story was interesting. Last few chapters were difficult to get through.

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  • Crazy Coyote
  • 2018-12-08

SMOKING HOT!!!

A pretty good tail (uh huh, I said that!) if I may say so, lol. I'm NOT gonna give any spoilers but I'll say that it IS adult material but it's well wrote and well narrated. Worth the money!
Now if they'll just hurry up and get parts 3 & 4 available. ...?

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  • Dennis D. Delisle
  • 2019-03-26

Great Series.

Been really digging this series a bunch. Strongly recommend. The story has been quite intriguing and gripping

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  • Kabul
  • 2019-03-26

Could have, but...

It should have been longer ( giggity). Avoiding " that's what_____said." Maybe stamina is an issue , I'm not going to judge.

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  • Amber Maull-Martinez
  • 2019-03-01

Wow! Just wow!

I have listened to quite a few books, being a trucker over the road, I have nothing but time to do so, but this series by far is one of the hottest most eroctic I've listened to and I've listened to almost 2000 books over the years. I have wished to be a character in many a book but I'd give my front 2 tires on this truck to be a character in this one. Bravo....

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  • Adam Chavoya
  • 2019-02-26

Epic!

This book is just flat out fun. Its not going to win any New York Times Bestseller awards or other literary honors, but its just simply fun as hell. If you love video games and grew up playing fantasy role playing games, whether digital or pen and paper style, this book is for you. Its got magic, hilarious humor, pop culture references and sex. Lots and lots of graphic sex. If any of those things interest you, then buy it asap. You wont regret it. ;)

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  • FOSTERBDAV66
  • 2019-02-05

Over the Top Sex

I enjoyed the first book much more. A fun premise and decent story. The amount of sex just made it less enjoyable to listen to. There's a huge difference between good sex scenes and going overboard. This will be the last of this series that I'll be getting.

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  • david
  • 2019-01-25

it's a good second book, but the series ie turning

the writing is still good, but the story is starting to lean more towards a porno.

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  • saul
  • 2019-01-13

this is a damn good series.

I don't care what other people say, this is a damn good series. I'd say more, but I'm running out of space.

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  • Richard Blumenstein
  • 2019-01-07

Just started getting predictable.

I listened to the first one and it was like a insecure fanboy, and for what it was I was OK with it. But in this one it was very predictable, to the point of disappointment. The puns took a chapter more than it should and it needed to. And anytime you describe something it was this movie plus this movie and didn't really get into the storytelling it could have gotten into. Probably won't buy the 3rd book.