Great Narration, Story, and Characters

Lots of lore and worldbuilding in this audiobook, the 10 hours may be intimidating, but it's nothing to worry about. There is enough content and interesting backstory to keep the audiobook entertaining for many hours. Senn Annis' narration and voices to the characters greatly enhances the audiobook. From main to side characters, she makes it easy to follow, especially if you have difficulty tracking characters' voices. I would love to see her narrate more books in this series. I highly recommend this audiobook and its prequel, "The Lost Machine" -another audiobook by Richard A. Kirk

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There's potential here

While the story is potentially a deeply involved and involving idea, the execution in both writing and narrating lack. Don't get me wrong, I listened all the way through, however this was more due to my imagination filling in for missing details.

There's little to fill in the background of this tale. While characters act upon this stage, they act upon a blank and patternless stage. I had little enough for my imagination to build scenes upon, buildings, environments, background people and events surrounding the characters were missing. It was as if I were seeing a movie in my mind with only the actors before a white screen. There's no real background for this location to help color in what the characters are living in, much less through.

Transitions were difficult to follow, mostly one scene jumping haphazardly into another. While this was jarring, it didn't take away from the story overall. As well, conversations and actions seemed to have little to do with a flow, almost as if they were wedged in to connected disparate things.

Finally, the narrator, whole proficient with separating characters and making them obvious to the listener, was drab and bleary in her narration. A kind of monotone suffused her work throughout. While this did not take away from the story it did make the story drag. Pauses were well used in some moments, nonexistent in others where a pause would have helped smooth the telling along.

Overall, this is a promising story that still needs polishing and shining, but it isn't a bad listen. I wouldn't recommend if you require serious depth to a story. However, if you can follow along a jagged path and imagine for yourself, this is a fair to good listen.

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OK

Although this was a good story, the narrator's voice was "monotonal" and did not add much to this book. Perhaps actually reading this would have been better.

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