where's the editor?

the story was great and the narration was exceptional, but it seems like this book seriously lacked in editing. phrases repeating, trains of thought really drawn out... I love this series, but I feel like now that I'm hooked the publisher no longer needs to try so hard.

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Loved it!

Loved the narration as much as the book. Except for Eve's voice. It felt a bit too masculine for me. But only a slight distraction.

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Book Seemed Too Long

I listened to the audiobook. This was intense as we learn about exactly what Evans did to Eve. I don't think of this book as being a standalone because it involves the entire Taggert-McCay team, and makes references to things that occurred in previous books. I think you really have to start at book one and work your way through.

At the same time I had a problem with this book, I enjoyed the fact that it was full of suspense. It just seemed to go on forever. Very early on, it was easy to figure out who Christie/Charlie was in relation to the group. There was one thing that turned out to be a surprise to me. Most of the tension had to do with hoping Evan's did not get his hands on Eve again.

Alex and Eve have been doing this back and forth through the series. I know it was their book, but way too much time was spent on them needing to reconnect. I also felt like Alex didn't listen to her any better the second time around.

The narration was ok. There were a couple of times that I wasn't sure which guy was talking. The narrator seemed to have an easier time in the last book, and he was switching between 3 accents.

The last book introduced Simon. This book introduced Charlie and Jesse. There is someone named Penny lurking in the background at the office. Hopefully Ian's book is next. I honestly think of I could have skimmed some of the back and forth between Alex and Eve, and, some of the situations that were very obvious this book would have been much better.

It was still a pretty good listen with action, suspense, romance, and mystery. I admit that I did like Alex better in his Dom persona then when he was running around behind Eve being pitiful. The secondary characters were pretty interesting too. I still have to listen to Ian's story, even if I'm pretty sure it will also be way too long.

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Lexi spins a tale of love and suspense

Alex and Eve (when they're on a mission) come together in a bedroom to say goodbye. Tragic heart ache to let go of their past and say hello to their future. Wow what a scene Lexi writes. It took alot of kleenex to get through that chapter.

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Awesome!!!

I love it!!! As I’ve said before I’m loving this series and this book did not disappoint. From loving and finally answered questions regarding the future of Alex and Eve, to the expected, and unexpected “villains.” its all incredible. I’m totally binge listening on this one!

good story

good story, good addition to the series. interesting listen, more of a spy book than previous in series. narration was good

best one yet!

I absolutely love these stories. BDSM stories with an actual mystery type story line.

new favorite

this has been my favorite of the series so far.Then again I thought that after the second book also. Now on to read the fourth one.

So exciting, I couldn’t stop

I’ve loved all the books so far, but this one was so hot and had my adrenaline racing with so much excitement. It was off the charts with thrills and heart wrenching events. Great narration by Ryan West, he has become my favorite male narrator, he makes females sound great & is extremely good with all kinds of foreign accents.

Best so far

This was the best book in the series thus far. Suspense and action made this book well rounded and good.