Rebirth: A LitRPG Apocalypse Adventure
Electrified, Book 1
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Rebirth: A LitRPG Apocalypse Adventure
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Narrateur(s):
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Grace Rolek
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Auteur(s):
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J.D. Olson
À propos de cet audio
Lightning brought her back. Now, it's her best weapon to survive the apocalypse.
When the end of the world arrived, Elysia was already dead. Amid widespread destruction, collapsing cities, and dangerous creatures, strange lightning struck her grave.
Rejuvenated by the violet lightning, life returns to her broken body. Elysia must find a way to harness the element in her veins or die as she's thrust into a dangerous new world.
Better than being dead.
She was always a free spirit, and survival is just another challenge. But as she powers up, something constantly nags at her: maybe, just maybe, her family is still alive somewhere out there.
Rebirth is book one of action-packed LitRPG apocalypse series about a reincarnated loner turned lightning-thrower. She'll carve out a place for herself in a world changed by a System, conquering zombies, dungeon bosses, and worse, all while fast-traveling on a yacht.
©2023 J.D. Olson (P)2023 Podium AudioThe major issues that arose:
1. The opening was great for a different genre. certain things I expected from a litrpg weren't happening and felt frustrated with the protagonist. If this had been just an apocalypse survival story, it would have been fine.
2. I often found myself thinking "tmi". There was too much detail for the smallest things. It made it feel very drawn out at times.
3. I found the term 'white knuckling the steering wheel' had worn out its welcome after one use.
4. Some one owes the author an apology for the terrible edit of the audio. there are pauses everywhere that make listening difficult.
In conclusion, the idea was good, the first portion of the book could use a revision, and somebody needs to fix the audio.
Needed another edit
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The intro is very generic and rather boring there's a decent but of action as the MC spends lots of time running away from and fighting off zombies but that's about it.
The MC despite finding herself back from the dead and with nobody around but zombies is more worried about possibly being arrested for looting than she is trying to prepare herself as much as possible. The MC might be one of the most brain dead characters I've ever encountered at the start of an apocalypse type story.
I can understand making some poor choices because of being in a panic with everything going on, but making as few good decisions as possible doing the bare minimum to try and survive when she's completely by herself and surrounded by zombies well I'm pretty sure the zombies are smarter than she is.
Apparently the story gets good eventually but I won't find out because the start is awful and there is absolutely nothing about what's been presented so far making me want to continue.
If you choose to listen to this and make it to when it's supposed to get good then I hope it was worth it.
Can't get far enough through to know if it gets better.
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No complaints about the narration though.
extremely bad start
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