Well written for a 12 year old.

The innumerable grammatical errors and consistently inconsistent phrasing, together with more plot holes than all three of the Disney Star Wars films combined and an MC wearing so much plot armour he must surely count as an immovable object make this one of the worst audio books I've ever suffered through.

The phrasing is similar to a poorly translated Japanese light novel for what it's worth. I've heard better dialogue from one of those random English speaking characters in an anime.

The story is all together something different. At no point did I ever have the sense that the author had the slightest inkling as to what he was planning. The story goes from miracle to cataclysm to another miracle, so on and so forth. The MC's fate shifts almost as often as his mood. He goes from joking with this companions to cursing their joviality in less than a breath. It might have made for an interesting plot device, the MC's deteriorating humanity could have fueled some actual character development, instead he just seems unintentionally mentally unstable.

Take it from me and give this one a pass.

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