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Shadow of the Conqueror

Chronicles of Everfall, Book 1
Written by: Shad Brooks
Series: Chronicles of Everfall, Book 1
Length: 18 hrs and 30 mins
4.5 out of 5 stars (112 ratings)

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Who better to fight back the darkness of the world than the one responsible for most of it?

Daylen, once known as the Great Bastard, the Scourge of Nations, Dayless the Conqueror, has lived in hiding since his presumed death. Burdened by age and tremendous guilt, he thinks his life is coming to an end. Unbeknownst to him he’s about to embark on a journey towards redemption where his ruthless abilities might save the world. Many battles await with friends to be made and a past filled with countless crimes to confront, all the while trying to keep his true identity a secret.

Indeed, it might be too much if not for the fabled power awaiting him.

Everfall is a world of perpetual day where the continents float in an endless sky. If one jumps from the continent they will fall for many hours before returning to the same place from which they fell. Skyships rule the air powered by shining sunstone and industrial darkstone. A legendary order of knights bears mystical powers which they use to hunt out the dreaded shade, monsters that regular people turn into if trapped in darkness for the length of a fall.

It is a world of enchanted swords, merciless monsters, mystical knights, and hard magic, filled with tales of wonder and adventure.

©2019 Shad Brooks (P)2019 Shad Brooks

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Brilliantly narration, decent world, okay writing.

The good: Michael Kramer and Kate Reading did an amazing job as always. I feel that the audiobook version is significantly better due to it being narrated by those master storytellers. The world-building was also really interesting. So often in fantasy, it is just assumed that it is set basically on earth but Shadows of the Conqueror really takes you to a whole new world. I really liked how Shad handled the main character who should have been really overpowered.

The bad: There are definitely some parts that could have been edited to make things clearer and more in line with the overall message. In the audiobook, it is mitigated by the awesome narrators but when I read through the ebook I'm sure they'll stand out and bother me. More beta readers might have helped.

The ugly: I was a little surprised by the fascination with sex, and rape. There is nothing explicit but it definitely is a major theme. Based on what I know about the author I was expecting swords, dragons, castles, and MACHICOLATIONS! I just wasn't expecting him to write so much about sex. But I guess you have to make monsters monstrous.

Overall a decent book I will read again. Would recommend to late teens and adults.

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Guilty Pleasure Fantasy

The book's okay. The performance is good, as you'd expect. Specifically, the magic system and world are well explored, even if there are some noticeable parallels between this and other famous works. The characters aren't half bad either.

I'd rate this book better if characters were not used as a mouthpiece to espouse unchallenged highschool-grade criticisms of socialism and authoritarianism, or shallow economic theory.

Perhaps Shad thought it would be okay if he stuck to making non-controversial positions, since the main cast's overton window on policies is very narrow. But that's part of the problem. There is no nuance to the positions they espouse.

As an aside, there is a lot of gratuitous violence for its own sake, rather than for world or character building. I'm pretty sure a lot of this could be cleaned up by a good editor, so scenes were more succinct.

I've seen some comments saying this book wouldn't be published by a major printing house, and I see why they'd say that. Shad has some areas of strength of course, but he needed someone to tell him when certain scenes or details were unnecessary, and when a character needed more depth, and when the politics was too heavy-handed.

I think most professional authors need this, so this isn't a criticism of his writing skills so much as it is simply an observation.

Like I said Shad is good enough where the flaws weren't overpowering for me, and I DID enjoy my time with the book. And I don't get the sense he was lazy. Still he does go overboard a lot of the time.

He'll probably improve immensely if he keeps publishing books.




[ Some Nitpicking & Spoilers ]

I hated how the protagonist says 'life is the worst torture i can think of' every other chapter, and no one calls him out for being a coward - ever. It is fine for him to be biased, I guess, but for god's sake let the narrative repudiate his conviction because it is annoying and frankly absurd that life be the worst torture. I would think torture would be the worst torture. Duh. This guy tortured people for a living so he should have connected the dots.

I also didn't like how rape was overused as a narrative device. It's supposed to evoke emotions from the listener, but after the 7th time it stops evoking any reaction from me. Now, I think Shad uses rape to establish the protagonist as an anti-hero, but he sacks and burns cities for peacefully protesting, murders women and children for the mildest of crimes, and even when he is trying to redeem himself still murders people without hesitation. The rape is gratuitous, and the number is staggering and nigh unbelievable - considering he ought to have been running an empire at war constantly, I fail to understand how he found time to rape 300 women, each women raped for a month before being discarded.

So, he had a woman constantly in his bed for 30 years, and he explains he didn't know he was raping them even though he forced them to walk around his palace naked, and forced them to have sex with him night after night. He thought they were 'willing'.

Like, this does happen in real life, it's how rape happens, but not 300 times and not over such an extended period?

It's like, not to equivocate or be cheeky or anything, I went hunting every day, and every month I'd select a slightly different area of the forest to go to, and after 30 years I hadn't realized the game was disappearing. This, while I ran like, I don't know, Disney, while simultaneously being a writer for new properties, and an actor for my movies.

It's just a little hard to swallow someone was so dedicated to a task, and yet so ignorant of what they were doing.

But anyway.

I think, if you wanted to get the reader to sympathize with a rapist like this, you need a lot more care and nuance, and most importantly a dramatic and charismatic first person pov centered around those events. I guess that's a lot to ask for, but all the more reason why the rape, especially to this degree, should have been cut.

[Moving On]

There are certain arcs in the story which are clearly better than the rest, though. The end conflict, if brief was emotionally powerful (even though I knew what was going to happen).

And I'll end this post with a little more praise. I think ultimately the protagonist is a pretty realistic antihero, aside from the cringe guilttrips and gratuitous amounts of rape. Which is not to say it couldn't have been written with more subtlety but, his back story and personality are minimally believable.

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A promising debut novel with a B. Sanderson vibe

This is a promising debut novel from an amazing YouTube star. Overall the novel feels very much like a Brandon Sanderson novel, the influences are pretty clear from the worldbuilding to the thematic pseudo-swearing to the over explaining of cohesive magic systems. The worldbuilding is creative and imaginative without being overwhelming. Exploring how a few changes in physics and common magics allow for a uniquely industrialized society make it a really refreshing read. Feels incredibly fresh and vivid, and like the world was grounded

Action scenes are well-paced, detailed, plausible, and seem well researched. Just wish there were more conventional skirmishes- it was over saturated with superpower battles and didn't feel as grounded in normal meadevil combat which is clearly the author's strength. Combat scenes, especially those without much superpower usage feel incredibly vivid and realistic.

The narrators are great, especially the accented foreign character done by the female narrator.

Two aspects detracted from the novel's quality considerably:

1) Dialogue quality : A lot of the characters sounded very indistinct from each other, and stilted and melodramatic at times.
2) Mary Sue lead : It's a character with a cool backstory, but overpowered in nearly every way. More competent antagonists would have been welcome.

Overall though, great, and I'm extremely positive this amateur author will improve in future installments as his skill get refined.

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Potential to be great.

Parts where almost like reading a dnd rulebook. Tone down that part and focus on the actions vs the "bonds".

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Excellent listening for fans

I personally greatly enjoyed the story. Shad needs a better editor to reign in his rambling. The greatest issue with the book is when emersion and character voice are broken. It really pulls you or if the fascinating world, and sounds more like the authors YouTube channel than the characters voice. I do look forward to further work, and hopefully more stories in Everfall.

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Inspiring

Shad has written a compelling and engaging story. I absolutely loved it from beginning to end. The world of Everfall is unlike any other I have read or listened to. The clear systems of magic and reality felt natural and logical to the world. I look forward to what may be in store for Everfall in the future.

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Fanastic world and characters!

As the first work by Shad Brooks as far as I knew, I was worried at first. Those worries were found unneeded as I read. The world was immersive and the character progression was great. This novel shows the darkest and brightest parts of humanity and conveys a deep understanding of human nature. Amazing read!

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Excellent

Fascinating concept and unique magic system. The author's style clearly marks him as a Brandon Sanderson fan, and not in a derivative way.

The characters are likeable, even those with dark pasts, and disturbing past events are handled seriously and with tact, neither trivializing nor glorifying them.

Some information is re-explained more often than strictly necessary, but I am confident the author will strike that balance with time.

This book touches on many political and philosophical issues without becoming preachy.

Thoroughly enjoyable. Don be praised ;)

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A must have

This was an amazing story. A grab by the shirt collar and not let go. While the first two chapters are a little slow, once it kicks off, it refuses to slow down. I throughly enjoyed this story, and would recommend it to anyone.

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10/10 would recommend

An amazing listen, book and reader, highly recommended. The world and character building is definitely my favorite parts. The world following is own rules will and the characters reacting in ways that make them feel very real.

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 2019-07-18

Shad get a better Editor

I'm writing this on my phone so sorry in advance. I'm a fan of Shad's YouTube channel. I've read Brandon Sanderson's books and Robert Jordan's. There is so much influence in these and it really shows. The premise is very interesting but I honestly think if you want to make a world builder book with this much detail you need to spread it out. As others have pointed out there are big information dumps that don't seem to fit where they are placed. I would rather have the story show me how the world works like Sanderson or Jordan. The main character is very hard to self identify with because he talks about how much he regrets killing people and how his greatest punishment for his crime is living with the guilt. Then he goes and kills a bunch of criminals. The darker themes of the book (sex, rape, murder, and genocide) seem to be delivered awkwardly. The action scenes are done very well and are enjoyable.The narrators absolutely blow me away everytime I listen to them and they do an amazing job like always. Shad, I haven't read any of your other stuff so I'm not sure how this compares but this seems like a great attempt. I enjoyed the ride and was able to finish the book and have listened to much worse books. I did enjoy the book but I think it could use much more polish. I look forward to listening to anything you might write in the future. To anyone looking to purchase the book go ahead and support the author. It was a fun book and would enjoy reading more about the world.

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  • John Henry Mecomber
  • 2019-07-27

Great first book

This tale of redemption has great world building and a fleshed out magic system. The story is good but after hearing the main character dump on himself continuously it starts to get a bi et old. There are also a lot of he said, she said, and characters says in this book so that gets old after listening after a while. The voice work is really jarring though when characters are voiced by the other reader after having been voiced by the other.

I would have thought the cast would have been divided in half since there were 2 readers here, but no. Whenever it is a male perspective Michael reads and when a female perspective then Kate reads. This leads to wildly different voices for a character.

Overall the book is a good listen and I recommend it but be prepared for some drag.

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 2019-08-16

Excellent World, Shallow Characters

This book is fantastic in its world building. The magic system is phenomenal, as someone who has an engineering background and an interest in particle physics and quantum mechanics I found the magic system engrossing. The attention to detail and the technical aspects were interesting and I appreciated that the author did not dumb down the engineering aspects of the world. I am highly appreciative that the protagonist is an engineer and brought that direct perspective to understanding the world he lives in. The world has great potential and even the background story would be a fascinating book in and of itself.
I do however feel that the characters' backgrounds are rather shallow and I never felt what I believe the author wanted me to feel about the protagonist. The graphic and violent aspects of the story were not emotionally powerful and felt contrived. The fight scenes and the usage of the magic system was excellent, but the motivations of the characters were very muddled. The author tries too hard to tie up lose ends to the determent of the overall story. The conclusion left me wanting to pick up the characters and put them back in the middle of the book where the plot and story were stronger and more entertaining. The end was extremely contrived and did not feel natural, but more like the author saying, "I'm running out of ink, better wrap it up." The creatures of the world and the original driving force of the protagonist was a much more interesting narrative and I was more drawn to the protagonist's past than the story's present.
Overall, as an exercise in world building 9/10, character development 5/10, emotional depth 2/10.

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 2019-07-27

world building told much and showed less

the storylines were overall good, the dialogue and exposition were sometimes awkward, overall is was an easy listen and I am looking forward to the next in the series. Kramer and Reading as always were great!

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  • Ben
  • 2019-10-26

A Tales of a Conquerers Shadow

It was a fairly simple story, but because of how short every chapter was I enjoyed it almost without stop in pace, leaving me to complete the book within a few days. The story wasn't perfect but damn was it good, I loved visualizing every scene and it happened seemlessly on command. It took the serious subject matters with respect while still being funny with its crude jokes and light puns. To say I enjoy it is more then a truth, all I can say is that the 2nd book better come out soon.

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  • Amazon Customer
  • 2019-09-13

Good premise, but poorly written

While the idea behind the story is sound, the book could do with a good editor.

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  • Adam Miller
  • 2019-07-15

An enjoyable book with a problematic protagonist

On the whole I liked this book, though there are certain aspects that didn't quite work for me. The world building is in depth and interesting. There were a few times I found the exposition laying out the magic system and the world to be a bit heavy handed and dragged the book down a bit. That said I generally enjoyed the bits where the protagonist explored his powers.

I also thoroughly enjoyed the supporting characters. Lyra and Kuseg (not sure on the name spelling as this is an audio book to me) were particularly interesting and I enjoyed Arek's terrible humor immensely.

The main issue with the book for me is the protagonist, Daylen. I get that he's supposed to be a former bad guy trying to be good, but I can't help but feel that Shad, the author, went a little too far in making him a monster in his former life and didn't do quite enough leg work to justify him as the protagonist through most the book. The simple fact is that Daylen commits too many brutal and barbaric acts in his new life for me to ever truly root for him. It doesn't matter that he feels bad about them or that he did them to terrible people. It just feels like there's a disconnect, if he is a despicable person who has seen the error of his ways and is seeking redemption, then he shouldn't be so quick to deal death to others. The first time it happened I understood as he is reverting to his old ways, but each time it happens after that it is harder and harder to empathize

All that said, I found there to be some legitimately touching moments between him and the supporting characters toward the end and found his over all fate and conclusion to the novel to be satisfying.

I would definitely like to see more from this world now that so much of it has been explained and the story can just get moving. I also have hope that I may like Daylen more in another installment.

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  • William
  • 2019-07-13

Better as an audiobook

Michael Kramer and Kate Reading do a wonderful job narrating this book. Despite a few rookie flaws (excessive dialogue attributions, too much info dumping, etc.), I would rank this book up there with Brandon's Mistborn series. If you're a fan of Mistborn or Brandon Sanderson in general, then you'll love the Chronicles of Everfall by Shad Brooks. I anticipate this series to be a slow burn, but I have no doubt it'll hit the best-seller list in due time. Shad does an amazing job with his world-building and thinking about how certain magic systems interact with the world in a way that I haven't seen other authors do before. It's obvious that Shad did his research, and he did it well.

Some people complain about the main protagonist being a Gary Stue, and under normal circumstances I'd have to agree. While I do think having a talking head would have been a better route in terms of Dayless knowing everything, the main thing keeping him from being a Gary Stue is his character flaws. His flaws are enough to offset the amount of power he's been given, and you'll often times see that they lead him to great misfortune. I think it's disingenuous when people say things like "I never felt like the main character was ever in any real danger," when the fact is that you can say that about any book, regardless of their Mary Sue status or the lack thereof. It's expected by the end of the book that the main character will generally be alive, or some part of their existence will persist through a good chunk of the story, otherwise there wouldn't be a story in the first place.

That said, there's a couple major flaws with the story. For one, it feels like the main character is just doing random stuff for a good portion of the book. For another good portion of the book, time is spent lecturing to the audience about how the world or magic systems work. It's quite a bit of overkill. I didn't feel like the book started going anywhere significant until about the 2/3rds mark.

I also felt like character's reactions to things were unbelievable, especially when it came to the main character's cold-hearted slaughter of random people. I'm sorry but, some of those incidents you wouldn't just shrug off and say, "Yeah, you're right. You were justified."

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  • Anonymous User
  • 2019-09-17

I NEED MORE!

the feels the friendships, and the world omg the light concept love it all and I want more

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  • Allen
  • 2019-08-12

Unnecessary long winded

Robert Jordan had a knack for using three paragraphs where one sentence would do and Shad Brooks expectedly follows the formula of his favorite author. I was often able to skip multiple chapters in Jordan's works and I did the same here. The story was a good effort for a first time published author, but it's the vocal performance that makes my overall rating three stars here. Not sure if I will continue the series, especially if the wordy writing style continues.

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  • Paul-Antoine
  • 2019-07-21

a very good book

The voice actors are perfect very experienced and could not have been better. The story is a very interesting mix of magic, ww2 references, medieval fighting and a great plot! The first chapter is a bit slow and difficult but once you have passed it, the rest of the story is great! Would absolutely recommand and will buy the next book. plus I highly recommand the youtube channel of the author.

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  • Client d'Amazon
  • 2020-02-19

Great book

This book is good. The author really made an incredible work of creating an immersive world with its own technology, its own magic, and its own diverse cultures; the quest and struggle for redemption of the main character is very well told and engaging and I personnally developped a love/hate reliationship for this character who is the incarnation of the worst and best things a human can be. Besides being a great fantasy novel, I would say this book can also be seen as a moral guide, although wether the author inteded it or not, I do not know.
The voice acting is great, both readers making an amazing jobs at conveying the emotions and accents of the multiple characters.
I definitely recommand this audio book.

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  • Thomas King
  • 2019-11-19

Great debut novel

An awesome magic system and unique world. Deep historical knowledge helps craft a great setting.