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  • The Mountains Rise

  • Embers of Illeniel, Book 1
  • Written by: Michael G. Manning
  • Narrated by: Alex Wyndham
  • Length: 13 hrs and 3 mins
  • 4.7 out of 5 stars (22 ratings)

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Written by: Michael G. Manning
Narrated by: Alex Wyndham
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Publisher's Summary

**A note of warning from the author;

I waited until the book was finished before writing this foreword. Now I find it difficult to encapsulate the book in a short summary, but I felt the need to forewarn you, The Reader. Many of you have probably read my previous series, Mageborn, which is set two millennia after the events in this book, so you may have some misconceptions about what you’ll find here.

Unlike Mageborn, this story encounters more adult issues. The main character does not always do the ‘right’ thing, and in fact, cannot be called a hero. Events conspire to darken his future and twist his morality, but his choices are his own. Most importantly, the story delves into some topics of a sensitive nature, particularly sexual abuse and violence, though there is nothing graphic in the telling.

I didn’t set out to write a book about those things, but they came up as part of the course of this tale, and I couldn’t avoid them. Before allowing some of the situations in this book, before writing them, I sought advice from a number of friends; people who have confided in me over the years. Several of them have been through experiences that correlate to a surprising degree with some of the darker elements within this tale.

Fortunately, they had much better outcomes, and in fact, I doubt any of them would condone the choices that the main character in this story makes. My main purpose in writing this foreword is to make sure that my audience understands that I don’t take the subject matter lightly.

- Michael G. Manning

©2014 Michael G. Manning (P)2015 Podium Publishing

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Amazing Performance but the Story… Ugh.

I am rating the full Embers trilogy so this book and the two that follow. The performance is absolutely outstanding and masterful the voice actor is amazing. 5 stars for Alex Wyndham his amazing voice acting is the only reason this isn’t a 1 star review.

What’s wrong with the story? It’s highly problematic…I always buy all the books in a series because I hate investing the time in a world just for one short book. So I’ve read and purchase all 3. I understand that writers can have characters who do or think bad things without endorsing those actions obviously but I also believe that when it comes to certain things like sexual violence, slavery, oppression etc. writers have a responsibility not to cheaply exploit those themes for the purpose of sensationalism or worse: jollies. I think that when considering the overall story arc this falls into the male fantasy column, so jollies.

This reads like an incel fantasy crafted for the express purpose of building a world where the hero has a licence to completely dehumanize all of the female characters including or maybe especially the one he allegedly “loves”. I know that the writer has given a disclaimer (“this is not a hero or typical hero“ or somesuch) but to me it’s made very clear that deep down the writer IS giving his main character a hall pass for all kinds of gross behaviour. The use of disturbing themes feels cheap when considered over the narrative arc of the trilogy and there are certain deeply tired cliches that I am sick unto death of seeing and that I grow impatient with when they drool from the pens of writers contemporary enough that they ought to know better. I feel sickened by this trilogy… Why?

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It’s the story of one more abusive rapey dude who is, deep down, just a misunderstood scared little boy with a good heart. Women are wombs and doormats and the hero is redeemed by the love of a good woman (spoiler: “a good woman” = doormat) who puts up with decades of horrific abusive behaviour always desperately looking for the smallest shred of evidence that the hero isn’t completely evil or cares or whatever. I grow tired even just explaining it. Just… UGH. I hate the fact that I’ve given this writer my money. I kept hoping the writer would redeem himself but the story only kept getting worse in its absolutely disgusting treatment of female characters and tiresome, gross male lead. This writer clearly has a pattern of writing female characters that are always just a thing or a device for the male lead to use and his evil female characters are always women with desire. He sure seems to find female desire evil when it isn’t expresses in the bounds of a compliant response to male desire because there’s a very noticeable pattern in his work… I’ve noticed it before and here it is again. He seriously could broaden the scope of his cliches just a little this is just tiresome and nauseating.

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topics in this story

topics in this story touch on subjects that should not be acceptable in any society.

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a grate book

this is a grate book a little out there but it's better then the rest of his work

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Not bad, not great

It was ok. The story has me engaged at some points and listening painfully at others. Some things are dragged out far longer than they should be, but there are good points. I'd give it a 3.5 if I could and would be satisfied with that rating.

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  • Dallas
  • 2015-04-25

Dark and heart wrenching beautiful.

Here you will find an expertly crafted world with story that will surprise you. The dark story only enhanced the moments of profound beauty, in my opinion. This was the first Michael G. Manning book I have read and I'm excited. to have found another excellent author. The Narrator, Alex Wyndham gave an awesome performance. I honestly did not like his voice at first but his undeniable talent was apparent in the first few minutes. I'm a fan now. I am more than satisfied with my purchase.

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  • joseph
  • 2015-05-06

the world isn't black and white

I took immense pleasure from this story. Love the narrator. My favorite parts were the development of his powers, the strategy and battles in the arena. I also really enjoyed his ability to create attachment between you and the characters at the beginning of the story, and the very realistic view of the drama that ensued. the world that was created was complex enough to be believable while not being bogged down with so many details to be grasped. all in all a very entertaining story

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  • SMAC
  • 2015-04-13

I mostly liked this book...

Only, a few this bothered me. The story is told by a character who is a father retelling it to his children. The kids would complain about the sex. All of which was fine, until I started thinking and noticing the level of detail invoked in some of the recountings. That's when things got off center for me. Nothing wrong with sex. Nothing terribly wrong with gratuity if one must. Nothing even with a father educating his children. But when he explains why he's adding such details, he tells them it's integral. Whether or not the protagonist placed his hand on her bum is integral? Again, I don't mind that it happened. The explanation, however, didn't fit the level of detail, and that eventually highlighted EVERY instance. I found myself thinking too much about it.


Also, the system of power was cool, but seemed unrefined. Obviously, one need not focus on such things to write a great story, but the manor and rate of the lead's growth in his ability seemed...a little...convenient. That might be too harsh, but near the end I couldn't understand how the lead was figuring things out. Likely the author knows where he's going, and perhaps our narrator and family dropped hints, but that's how I experienced THIS book.

Otherwise, the story and players are RIFE with conflict! Some may find it melodramatic at times. And there were a couple turning points near the start that had me shaking a furrowed brow, but nothing unbelievable IMHO.

I do look forward to the next. There are diamonds in this story, and I will try the other series.

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  • Mike
  • 2015-05-08

suspenseful . you keep wanting more.

wonderful detail with a storey line to match. Not for younger readers. A wonderful magic system that grows through the whole story. All the characters have a genuine personas. I really enjoyed the whole experience.

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  • Joe
  • 2015-04-07

Excellent continuation of the Illeniel story

I really enjoyed this book - I especially liked how Manning went back to the past to tell about the origins of the Illeniels without losing any of the characters from the previous installments and keeping these "present" characters involved in a believable, realistic and meaningful way.

It was thoroughly enjoyable. I look forward to the next installment.

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  • nnnnn
  • 2015-08-03

it could have been perfect

Have you listened to any of Alex Wyndham’s other performances before? How does this one compare?

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a minor problem I had with this story is that the author seems hesitant to fully embrace the mature/dark fantasy genre. the story has these interludes which try to rationalise certain events before they happen. "our hero is not really a bad man, he had no choice...". this only manages to interrupt a great story as well as spoil the plot for the next few chapters. I ended up skipping the next 2-4 minutes whenever this happens. great story overall

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  • Coral
  • 2015-04-02

Rape, magical induced rape the more rape.

the story started out a tad dull , sheep herding and the promise of the girl next door romantic. Then the rape started so I skip a chapter now the main character is magically inflaming the town folk (more rape) about 5 chapters later the town boys are trying to rape the girl next door and I am giving up on this.

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  • abel
  • 2015-04-09

Great book!!!

I've never felt the need to write one of these but I have to give credit where it is due. It had me from the beginning and I couldn't stop listening. Can't wait until took two is released.

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  • Bob-o
  • 2015-04-03

Much better than the Mageborn series.

Much better than the Mageborn serie, both the story and the narrator. Although, Mageborn is a good series, if you ger through the first 1/4 of the story when it gets better.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 2015-05-02

A great book

Loved it it was an amazing book it had you hanging on every word I just wasn't able to put the book down even

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