Why switch narrators?

I don't even want to listen to this. This narrator sucks. Should've just let the previous narrator do all 5 books

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Narrator SUCKS!!

Why is this guy talking like a scared slave every time he switch to Indie's voice?? And why is he saying Lee-yah* instead of Lay-yah*?? Like the narrator on the previous books. It's so distracting I can't even focus on the story. He could have at least tried to use a New York accent for Indie, Leah, and YaYa voice. This is crazy!! I'm only on chapter 3 and it's so annoying that I'm thinking of saying forget it, I'll buy the book.

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Great book horrible narrator

i loved it. highly anticipated and great as i expected. the story keeps you on edge. I believe it would have been phenomenal with a different narrator.

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Ethic Story

I'm ready for the story of Ethic....he sounds like my "Mr. Right"😆. This book could've been a stand alone book it was good not as much action as the other books in this series but still a great book and Cary Hite always delivers.

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2.5 stars...just okay

*SPOILERS*
Random thoughts as I listened to book 4

Pro
• Cary Hite’s narration
• Ethic’s character crossover from Moth to a flame
• The end of the Leah & YaYa storyline
• The promise of Chase and Mia & the treachery of Trina


Cons
• YaYa
• Indie
• Not a lot of storyline movement

Points of irritability
• *Yaya went from wanting Leah dead for 3 entire books, only for her to decide that she couldn't kill her in yet another cliffhanger. But book 4 opens with Yaya being determined is her wanting to kill her. Really?
• *Indie 4 books later and his character is JUST now realizing Leah is not a scorned ex? Even after everything his character witnessed firsthand and was hard evidence he was presented with in book 2? All I'm thinking is he’s a bit "thick"
• *Yaya, who remains completely unlikeable, is asking leah yet again why she hates her so much only to be told yet again that yaya stole her life..
• *Indie is Yaya's protector? She's never felt that in any other book. It’s an odd thing to think because she is about to marry
• *Now with the "surprise arrival, "Indie didn't follow YaYa out the venue. This woman whose love was so deep, so great, so profound?
• I'm on chapter 14 and they've just finished a flashback of Indie and Parker and what struck me as odd is that the author has, up until this point a really good job of showcasing the connection between Parker and Indie. In book 2, the connection between Indie and Chase was laid out and explained really well. The only connection to date that has not been showcased or written well enough to be believable is between Indie and Yaya. I'm in book 4 and I've never really understood or seen their “profound” love explained. I know the night they met, she was drunk. Literally, three paragraphs later she was pregnant and being beaten half to death. I think that's what bothers me about their love story it's unexplained and unbelievable. We see the drama, the time apart, we don’t see what binds them to each other. You even see what binds Yaya to Ethic. I think people who want Yaya and Indie together just do because they have been the focus since book 1 despite no evidence of their alleged deep love. Love that allows indie to choose or believe everyone but Yaya when it counts. Love that allowed her to walk away from him into not just 2, but two other men and an addiction. Hmmmm I don’t know. Okay I’m done with this point…Sorry yeah yeah yeah I know.
• *This should have been Book 3 not 4 and I’m assuming whatever is in Book 5 could have been in this book.

• damn it i hate i have to know how a story ends. If this is billed as the final book in the

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Perfect ending to the series

What did you like best about this story?

Ashley Antoinette didn't drag the story line from the first three books on until we got bored with it. I loved that. This book could have stood on it's own really. I liked how i had to second guess how i felt about each character. I couldnt decide if i liked or hated them. Also, I loved this stronger, determined Yaya.

Which character – as performed by Cary Hite – was your favorite?

Ethic

Was there a moment in the book that particularly moved you?

When two opposing sides put aside their differences to save a common love.

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Really! I want my money back for all 4!

You really brought Ethic back from Moth to a flame? not sure why his storyline in this book was irrelevant! This book was nothing in comparison to the first one! the 2nd and 3rd books were repetitive! this book ended with a lot of loose ends! if this really is the end to this series I just wasted a lot of money buying the entire series! I'm new to the urban fiction, I usually look at the reviews and try not to go off of them but I should have listened! I enjoy your writing but this last book was a true disappointment!

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excellent

I really enjoyed this series love it!!! hope there's another part.good job will always support this a author

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Love it

i love it ..ending surprised me. ready for the next book release this story was amazing

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Loving Prada Plan!!!!!

It was above and beyond!!!!! I wish she would make more books on indie and yayas marriage!!!! Man I loved it all 4 books. Please make more please!!!! It made me feel like I was there watching everything. Awesomeness!!!! Sometimes I feel like I have a love like Yaya. Thank u for reviving my imagination!!!! Please keep them coming.

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