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The Crafter's Defense

Dungeon Crafting, Book 2
Auteur(s): Jonathan Brooks
Narrateur(s): Louise Cooksey
Série: Dungeon Crafting Series, Livre 2
Durée: 11 h et 31 min
4.5 out of 5 stars (10 évaluations)

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Description

Sandra managed to survive the first major incursion from the nearby Orcs, thanks in part to the help a certain half-orc/half-dwarf provided. However, Kelerim left her dungeon to seek out his father, leaving her all alone with just Winxa - her dungeon fairy - as company.

With the loss of her new friend comes some opportunities, at least; she now has the freedom to craft whatever she wants, and the threat of her dungeon core’s destruction from outside forces is practically absent. She even has the opportunity to upgrade her core size, unlocking additional constructs for use as dungeon monsters, as well as a new core-specific skill.

Unfortunately for Sandra, a particular action outside of the dungeon has unintentionally drawn attention to her activities, and there’s now a very serious threat to her survival. Racing against the clock, the crafting-based dungeon needs to find a way to prevent her destruction, all the while dealing with the problems her expanding area of influence has created.

Because it’s not only the nearby races that she has to deal with - but the nearby dungeons, as well.

This dungeon core story contains litRPG/gamelit elements such as statistics and leveling and a heavy crafting emphasis. No profanity and no harems.

©2019 Jonathan Brooks (P)2019 Jonathan Brooks

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Difficult to review

This is probably one of the most difficult books to review I've ever encountered. The story is great, I love the premise and many parts of the story itself. Unfortunately there are a lot of technical issues which really disrupted the immersive experience and enjoyment of the story. It is hard to distinguish how much of it is the writing & poor editing and how much is the narrator, but both need work. The technical mistakes hit me like an out of tune chord, some suspended disbelief world building / logical mistakes can also be quite annoying. The narrator also has the tendency to emphasize things in an odd and unnatural way, and a lot of the "voices" used are re-used for other characters which is annoying.

Overall I guess enjoyed it, but it's frustrating how much better it could have been and it's really a love hate relationship.

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  • chris warren
  • 2020-01-10

Needs more editing

The author has rather redundant word usage, often using similar words right next to each other. The lists in the book easily take over a minute to read, and several are repeated far too often for my taste. The use of acronyms did more to confuse me then anything else. Finally the narrator has a habit of cutting off the end of some words, making it hard to understand her occasionally.

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  • James Cook
  • 2020-08-27

OMG my ears are bleeding

so don't get me wrong. love his work but i got the whole series HOPING there would be less stats and that the ...like , totally, omg, like gag me with a spoon narration quality would improve.

the narrator CONSTANTLY ends sentences of statement with that god awful nasally tone that squeaks up to make it intone as a question versus statement. sends pain from my eardrums down my spine every time. don't know if i can finish this one to cringe through the third or just turn them back in for credit. i most certainly could not bring myself to sponsor any future purchase by any authors that have hired this narrator

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  • Keeg
  • 2020-03-04

Need more

This book was as good the first. Doing very well balancing pacifism and combat, with no hesitation when combat is needed. Looking forward to the next book.

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  • DJ
  • 2020-07-14

Good stuff

I am really enjoying this series as it evolves in New and interesting ways. I must say though the creator whoever they are, are kinda big irresponsible kids with an ant farm.

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  • Kristopher
  • 2020-07-05

She's trying

Better narration than book one. It is like someone actually reached out to Louise Cooksey with constructive criticism after listening to that one. Still has parts that I wanted to stab my ears at, but much better on the whole. I actually find myself looking forward to book three to see if she improves more.

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  • Glenecollins
  • 2020-06-28

A good sequel

It is a pretty good sequel to a good book, some interesting concepts were introduced so I am looking forward to the next book

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  • James Lee
  • 2020-05-25

Good continuation!!

The first story was a little slower than I liked, but this one more than made up for it. Many different elements came together to form a solid story that is sure to build into a rich world and interactions with various world elements.

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  • Natalya Kracko
  • 2020-05-24

Just as good as the first

Superlative performance and origanl tale. Feels a bit vaive but the main character isn't that old.

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  • Kindle Customer
  • 2020-04-23

calling all dungeon creator fans

awesome....i can't say it enough jonathan is a master of his craft of storytelling and with each book gets better...if that's possible...i can't wait to check out book 3 of winxie and sarahs adventures....also I really enjoy the narrator Louise she does a really good charature reading

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  • Rynette
  • 2020-03-16

good clean book

No bad language, and no sexual or suggestive content. huge Thank you to the author.