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Guild Master

A LitRPG Adventure (Tower of Power, Book 1)

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Auteur(s): Ivan Kal
Narrateur(s): Ryan Burke
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Morgan used to be a pretty normal guy. He went to college by day and played online games by night, leading his guild into new conquests - until he got hit by a car and a dude wearing a wet suit appeared in front of him. The man offered him a new chance at life in a world he had created, a world with similar rules to the games Morgan loved to play. There is the promise of great rewards and power, he says, if Morgan manages to complete the Tower of Power. Stupid name, I know.  

Morgan didn't usually trust strangers who seem to have god complexes, but he was in a pinch. There's a crazy-looking dude saying he is technically not a god on one end of the tunnel and a blinding light on the other end - and he was really not digging the light.   

So he accepted the offer from the surfer god-not-god.  

Getting dropped into a strange new world with no idea what the rules are was not something Morgan was a fan of; and in this strange world, it seems like everything is out to eat his face. It was a good thing, then, that he stumbled onto two half-elf twins willing to help him get the hang of this strange new world.   

Now, all he needs to do is survive long enough to reach this tower.

©2018 Ivan Kal (P)2019 Tantor
Classiques Fantastique Fiction Littérature et fiction Jeu LitRPG
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- story made by a kid.
- naration made by anyone who can read.
It was realy cringe, tryied it cause it was free.

Naration realy makes a book.

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The narrator ruines the book the way he reads the interactions between people, it doesn’t feel natural.

The narrator does a terrible job

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The story by itself is actually quite good, almost enjoyable.
The main problem I find with this novel, is that the MC is too childish, almost brainless. He does and says the obviously weird and most annoying things almost every damn time.
The MC being a jackass also does not help the story to stand out when the narrator's voice is...well, a little too suitable to playing the role of a jackass (no offense, my dude). For a story with this kind of MC, something a little deeper or a narrator with more bass would curb the childishness of the MC, and make it feel a bit more presentable.
No offense to the "Plus Category", but I can see why the first 3 volumes of this novel fall into this category.
I am going to finish the first 3 "free" volumes. But, unless there is some kind of miracle, divine intervention, or just some major improvements, I probably won't be spending my money or credits on this book.
Conclusion: A potentially decent premise ruined by a terribly created main character, played by an equally suitable sounding narrator.

Main character needs an overhaul

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blew my mind how you started the story. incredible well written 👏🏿 my friend introduced me to this and it was kinda fun. Having a chance to see how the adventure and events turn out and be played. Motivate me to play again

Great story

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It’s alright, not the greatest about not bad either. Decent entertainment when bored, I got it for free.

It’s alright

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